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~Just A Taste?~ Mihael Keehl X Reader || Mello

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"Come on."

"No"

"Just a taste?"

"Nope."

"Why not?!"

[Name] sighed. This had been going on for the past several minutes. Ever since she set foot into the room, holding that delectable bar of heaven.

"I shared my chocolate with you!" Mello argued.

"Yeah, once. And that was only because the piece you gave me fell on the floor." [Name] calmly answered before taking a bite out of her candy bar.

Mello opened his mouth, but couldn't come up with a legitimate comeback. He knew [Name] was right. He didn't like sharing any type of sweets with anyone. Not because he was greedy.
Chocolate was always an outlet for Mello. It calmed him, almost like a drug.
And the fact that he was out of that delicious substance, unable to satisfy his craving, was starting to get under Mello's skin.

"I'll pay you back."

"Oh? And how do you plan on doing that?" The young girl asked, raising an eyebrow.

Mello bit his tongue. He wasn't exactly a patient man, especially in a situation such as this.

"I'll take you to the fair. Now give me some."

"The fair ended yesterday." [Name] replied, trying to keep her composure. She could tell that Mello was clearly frustrated. And even though she loved him, she couldn't deny how funny he looked right now. He reminded her of a little kid throwing a tantrum over not getting a new toy.

"Dammit [Name]! I'm losing my patience with you!" Mello snapped, but quickly froze as a new, crisp, unopened chocolate bar was pulled out of a certain someone's pocket.

"You honestly think I wouldn't get you one?" [Name] asked, a slight smirk on her face.

Barely able to finish her sentence, the chocolate was snatched from her hands and ripped open. [Name] laughed to herself, amused at how content Mello was when given what he wanted.

~Later That Night~

Two thirty in the morning wasn't exactly a good time to be woken up. The room was still dark as [Name] opened her eyes as she felt a warm breath on the back of her neck.

"Mello, what are you doing?" She groaned. All she wanted to do was sleep. But she knew that was going to be nearly impossible as a pair of arms wrapped around her waist. [Name] sighed.

"Mello, I'm tired. What do you want?"

"Just a taste" He whispered in her ear, causing [Name]'s face to heat up. A small smile formed on her face.

She knew Mello always got what he wanted.
And who was she to deny him?

~
It's short, I know ^^;
But this is the first time I've posted any fanfiction on here.
So... *hides under desk* please don't be too harsh
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I won't say this isn't undeniably great story, but to point out a few mishaps here. First, there was little detail on where this was taking place, just a little bit more detail might be good. Second, the drop is a bit too sudden, a little more climax might intrigue the reader more. Third, in the ninth paragraph you could separate it into, probably about two or three paragraphs (you may not agree with this one), or just put a space after the periods, not a new paragraph mark. Although overall I loved this story! You wrote Mello's character near perfectly! Great piece of work!